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Jean-Louis Rameaux

Strange dream...

Le mercredi 24 août 2011 à 11:25, posté par Jean-Louis Rameaux · 303 lectures

I had this strange dream...
You had gone away
and you had left no note, no letter or anything
...
I dreamed that you were away
far away

and that the sand on the beach, still wet, had your footsteps going away...

I was on the beach, alone, screaming your name, terrified...


Then I woke up and you were gone

I ran on the beach but it was pure, without your footsteps

I screamed, terrified

But from the kitchen you answered: Coffee is ready!
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2 commentaires

worrell02 · le jeudi 25 août 2011 à 15:15

A cup of coffee and back to reality!
http://www.mespoemes.net/worrell02

worrell02 · le jeudi 25 août 2011 à 15:19

Sorry! sent too soon!
J'ai bien aimé la fin!

ps: You HAD gone away, plutôt que 'were'.
Amitiés
Ivy
http://www.mespoemes.net/worrell02

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