Strange dream...
I had this strange dream...
You had gone away
and you had left no note, no letter or anything
...
I dreamed that you were away
far away
and that the sand on the beach, still wet, had your footsteps going away...
I was on the beach, alone, screaming your name, terrified...
Then I woke up and you were gone
I ran on the beach but it was pure, without your footsteps
I screamed, terrified
But from the kitchen you answered: Coffee is ready!
You had gone away
and you had left no note, no letter or anything
...
I dreamed that you were away
far away
and that the sand on the beach, still wet, had your footsteps going away...
I was on the beach, alone, screaming your name, terrified...
Then I woke up and you were gone
I ran on the beach but it was pure, without your footsteps
I screamed, terrified
But from the kitchen you answered: Coffee is ready!

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worrell02 · le jeudi 25 août 2011 à 15:15
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worrell02 · le jeudi 25 août 2011 à 15:19
J'ai bien aimé la fin!
ps: You HAD gone away, plutôt que 'were'.
Amitiés
Ivy
http://www.mespoemes.net/worrell02
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