Can you understand my feeling ?
I found peoples who came the worst day,
with the best gift far more than all money,
trust relationships and a great presence,
forget the time and take many pleasance
And yet I didn't think I deserve you
I've been told I'm as important as you.
Can you understand my feeling ?
Friday's night when we're playing
Can you see this precious moment ?
When we share all these instant
I was lost but you found me,
We said us we will cross the eternity
Many years later we still drink together,
From simple friends we are now brother,
everything will be blank without your laugh,
If one day everything stops, out i'll off...
Can you understand my feeling ?
Friday's night when we're playing
Can you see this precious moment ?
When we share all these instant
We will remember our great adventure
we'll go in our sanctuary lost in the nature
Later, we will take the point of our lives
we know our memories will survives,
Even after many years, we keep our relation
I will keep in mind all our moment of rebellion
Can you understand my feeling ?
Friday's night when we're playing
Can you see this precious moment ?
When we share all these instant
We are now too taken by our lives to see us,
this period is over, there is no more discuss,
Can you understand my feeling ?
Our empty sanctuary is frightening,
Can you see this precious moment ?
which vanished in an instant...
today there are no more rebellion
We no longer have any thrill...
Can you understand my feeling ?
Our empty sanctuary is frightening,
Can you see this precious moment ?
which vanished in an instant...
with the best gift far more than all money,
trust relationships and a great presence,
forget the time and take many pleasance
And yet I didn't think I deserve you
I've been told I'm as important as you.
Can you understand my feeling ?
Friday's night when we're playing
Can you see this precious moment ?
When we share all these instant
I was lost but you found me,
We said us we will cross the eternity
Many years later we still drink together,
From simple friends we are now brother,
everything will be blank without your laugh,
If one day everything stops, out i'll off...
Can you understand my feeling ?
Friday's night when we're playing
Can you see this precious moment ?
When we share all these instant
We will remember our great adventure
we'll go in our sanctuary lost in the nature
Later, we will take the point of our lives
we know our memories will survives,
Even after many years, we keep our relation
I will keep in mind all our moment of rebellion
Can you understand my feeling ?
Friday's night when we're playing
Can you see this precious moment ?
When we share all these instant
We are now too taken by our lives to see us,
this period is over, there is no more discuss,
Can you understand my feeling ?
Our empty sanctuary is frightening,
Can you see this precious moment ?
which vanished in an instant...
today there are no more rebellion
We no longer have any thrill...
Can you understand my feeling ?
Our empty sanctuary is frightening,
Can you see this precious moment ?
which vanished in an instant...
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guillaume · le samedi 20 mai 2017 à 02:53
guillaume · le samedi 20 mai 2017 à 09:58
Miles · le dimanche 21 mai 2017 à 17:09
Je suis allé voir sur tes poème et t'y es répondu par rapport à Racine ainsi que sur la sensibilité.
La Thaïlande, ça doit être sympa, J'espère que tu aura l'occasion d'y aller et de réaliser un rêve.
Ne perd pas espoir de trouver,continue tes recherches, J'espère que tu trouvera et que tu pourra t' épanouir dans celui-ci, amicalement miles.
Philip (Jardin de Lune) · le mercredi 31 mai 2017 à 09:25
Pas un commentaire, ici (cela viendra plus tard), mais juste te dire - comme je le dis aux autres ami(e)s - que je suis surbooké en ce moment, et te dire aussi que j'ai à peine le temps de faire le minimum sur notre cher site. Je ne t'oublie pas ni délaisse ta poésie. J'irai combler mon retard dès que possible.
C'était juste un petit mot de politesse pour excuser mon absence sur tes vers.
Je commenterai tous tes autres poèmes dès que possible et me permettrai de t'indiquer quelques uns de mes écrits qui pourraient d'intéresser (nouvelles dans un cadre anglo-saxon, etc...)
Amitiés, Miles. Philip.
(www.mespoemes.net/philipchevalier)
Miles · le jeudi 1 juin 2017 à 19:10
Vous avez tout votre temps, et ça me ferais plaisir d'aller voir d'autres de vos écrits !
Passez une bonne semaine, amicalement Miles.
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