^^i dreamed a dream^^

There was a time, when men were kind
And their voices were soft
And their words were inviting
There was a time, when love was blind
And the world was a song
And the song was exciting
There was a time it all went wrong
I dreamed a dream in time gone by
When hope was high and life worth living
I dreamed that love would never die
I dreamed that God would be forgiving
Then I was young and unafraid
And dreams were made and used and wasted
There was no ransom to be paid
No song unsung, no wine untasted
But the tigers come at night
With their voices soft as thunder
As they turn your hope apart
As they turn your dreams to shame
He slept a summer by my side
He filled my dreams with endless wonder
He took my childhood in his stride
But he was gone when autumn came
And still I dream he'd come to me
That we would live the years together
But there are dreams that cannot be
And there are storms we cannot weather
I had a dream my life would be
So different from the hell I'm living
So different now from what it seemed
Now life has killed the dream I dreamed
And their voices were soft
And their words were inviting
There was a time, when love was blind
And the world was a song
And the song was exciting
There was a time it all went wrong
I dreamed a dream in time gone by
When hope was high and life worth living
I dreamed that love would never die
I dreamed that God would be forgiving
Then I was young and unafraid
And dreams were made and used and wasted
There was no ransom to be paid
No song unsung, no wine untasted
But the tigers come at night
With their voices soft as thunder
As they turn your hope apart
As they turn your dreams to shame
He slept a summer by my side
He filled my dreams with endless wonder
He took my childhood in his stride
But he was gone when autumn came
And still I dream he'd come to me
That we would live the years together
But there are dreams that cannot be
And there are storms we cannot weather
I had a dream my life would be
So different from the hell I'm living
So different now from what it seemed
Now life has killed the dream I dreamed
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9 commentaires
José · le mardi 21 février 2012 à 10:44
Hugs.
shine · le mardi 21 février 2012 à 16:16
domidom · le mardi 21 février 2012 à 16:29
Rien n'est jamais vraiment fini, par contre, il faut toujours se battre et recommencer...
Je vous avez répondu sur le poème
où vous aviez gentiment laissé quelques vers, hélas, vous n'êtes jamais revenue lire....
Allez, prenez votre courage à deux mains et dîtes vous que le Soleil brillera encore pour vous...
Si vous pouviez imaginer les ténèbres que j'ai dû traverser, pour enfin connaître le bonheur, mais j'ai dû attendre d'avoir 44ans, le bonheur est comme le facteur, il sonne toujours deux fois....
Amicalement...Domie...
shine · le mercredi 22 février 2012 à 07:23
navré de ne pas etre revenue vous lire,j'ai les idées perfuse c temps si,je ne me retrouve plus,tout va de travers dans ma vie;je n'ai que se site pour laisser exprimé mes peines et mes douleurs,quand je le fais,je me sens soulagé car lorsque vous me lisez j'ai l'impression que mon malheur est partagé avec mes lecteurs.
merci beaucoup de m'avoir eclairé un peu mon chemin,ça devenait trop sombre depuis quelque temps.
amitiés sinceres..SHINE
shine · le mercredi 22 février 2012 à 07:53
domidom · le mercredi 22 février 2012 à 14:08
Je vais simplement ajouter tes vers aux miens....
Loïc n'intervient pas dans la construction du poème, il faudra seulement que je lui demande l’autorisation de le repos ter le moment venu, j'espère qu'il acceptera...
Je me permet de te faire une grosse bise....
Toutes mes sincères amitiés...
Domie...
mamine · le jeudi 23 février 2012 à 11:13
i am here dont forget this okkkkkkkk
Rosa
mamine · le jeudi 23 février 2012 à 11:16
biz
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Rosa
shine · le jeudi 23 février 2012 à 15:44
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