remember
Remember when she told you,
That between sun and rain,
You were her rainbow!!!
Today………
She lost you forever,
When she THOUGHT that keeping you far from her,
WOULD make you SAFE and free…
Shine!!!!!
Wake up from your dream, which seems TO be real..
Now!!!!!!! Everything is gone,
And flowers have faded
No way from today; when her heart STOP, died and broken.
She can’t breathe without him
But she will try to be alone again and again
It was her destiny,
That love never knocked at her door,
At the beginning..
You were her hope…
But At the end….
You’ll be her death
each day,
she stays here
Believing that you’re coming back another day
So far………..but so near
From her heart, and her lips
She feels nothing till you leave her,
Lost her way,
And lost her mind
But she’s never forget that you were her sunrise in the dark.
From this moment…
She keeps her heart in A case,
Where nobody can find it.
That between sun and rain,
You were her rainbow!!!
Today………
She lost you forever,
When she THOUGHT that keeping you far from her,
WOULD make you SAFE and free…
Shine!!!!!
Wake up from your dream, which seems TO be real..
Now!!!!!!! Everything is gone,
And flowers have faded
No way from today; when her heart STOP, died and broken.
She can’t breathe without him
But she will try to be alone again and again
It was her destiny,
That love never knocked at her door,
At the beginning..
You were her hope…
But At the end….
You’ll be her death
each day,
she stays here
Believing that you’re coming back another day
So far………..but so near
From her heart, and her lips
She feels nothing till you leave her,
Lost her way,
And lost her mind
But she’s never forget that you were her sunrise in the dark.
From this moment…
She keeps her heart in A case,
Where nobody can find it.

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domidom · le mardi 6 mars 2012 à 16:15
(Les fleurs sont estompées), (Vous étiez son espoir, vous serez sa mort)...bien sinistre tout ça!!
De beaux vers , noyés dans une atmosphère d'ombre et de néant...
J'ai repris tous les vers que tu avais écris en bas de mon poème (dessine-moi), et je vais poster la semaine prochaine, un poème que j'ai intitulé (Je dessine), avec tes vers et les miens travaillés ensemble....
Le poème sera signé........ (Shine/Domidom).
Mes amitiés....Domie...
Amitiés....Domie...
SHINE · le mardi 6 mars 2012 à 16:52
amitiés..shine
worrell02 · le mercredi 7 mars 2012 à 22:56
Amitiés
Ivy
http://www.mespoemes.net/worrell02
worrell02 · le mercredi 7 mars 2012 à 23:00
Ivy
http://www.mespoemes.net/worrell02
shine · le jeudi 8 mars 2012 à 06:33
worrell02 · le jeudi 15 mars 2012 à 21:15
Il y juste cette phrase dont je n'ai pas
bien saisi le sens. "She feels nothing till you leave her," ( depuis, ou maintenant que tu l'as quitté peut-être?)
A plus
Ivy
http://www.mespoemes.net/worrell02
worrell02 · le mardi 20 mars 2012 à 22:46
Amitiés
Ivy
http://www.mespoemes.net/worrell02
shine007 · le jeudi 22 mars 2012 à 13:58
worrell02 · le samedi 24 mars 2012 à 19:55
Sorry! Je vien s de voir que j'avais oublié deux choses But she’s never 'FORGOTTEN' et " when her heart StoppED!
Till next!
Amitiés
Ivy
http://www.mespoemes.net/worrell02
shine007 · le mardi 27 mars 2012 à 19:19
j'apprecie énormement ton aide;merci beaucoup
amitiés sinceres
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